Notes About The Poem

Well, sorry folks no photo, out of respect for the family, however, I have seen 1000's of photos of the Syrian war, 300,000 dead, and the world sits idly by. I have a much harsher poem, about this topic, will have to think about posting it, before I do, if I do.

Line In the Sand

Obama drew his mighty line in the sand
Dare ye not to cross me

Assad replied in kind
Gassing thousands and laughing

A little Syrian boy has drowned
Siblings to weak to cross that mighty line

Salvation was the evasive dream
Father shall never escape the nightmares
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Callus Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 9:23 AM
The leaders have their 'weapons' by which to 'deal' with international crises; very often they are ineffective; however your pen, Arthur, appears to be more powerful! // paul
Vaso Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 9:07 PM
I wound trade my pen for a little common sense any day!!!! thanks Paul!
Severo Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 10:47 PM
Made me cry, this is what happens when leaders fail to lead.
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 10:13 PM
So true Aurore, very wise words indeed!
Nance Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 7:12 AM
This makes me want to cry
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 10:12 PM
For every tear, I have 1 hug
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 2:45 AM
Kudos to you for writing on topics others shy away from:-) hugs Jan xx 7
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 10:11 PM
Thanks Jan!!! hugs
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 12:27 AM
So sad, Arthur and says so much with so few words.
Vaso Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 10:11 PM
Thank you Andrea, missed responding here!
Rv Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 10:48 PM
Oh!! How horrible!! This is an amazing poem!! :D :D
Vaso Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 11:52 PM
Thank you so much Sneha!!! hugs
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