Limousine Ride (Based On Comfortably Numb Scene From "the Wall")

Slashed lines’ frequency extends 
Neon-freckled wormhole ride 
Unstable tide rocks the set 
Slashed lines’ frequency extends 
Ivory starlight, synthetic decay
Shape distorting abyssal cry
Slashed lines’ frequency extends 
Neon-freckled wormhole ride
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 28, 2016 at 7:22 AM
Cesar Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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July 30, 2010 at 11:09 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Cesar. Wishing you a beautiful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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July 29, 2010 at 5:12 PM
A fine display of words well penned Triolet, Cesar
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