Kim Rodrigues Poet Tanka

Limitless

whiteness - a canvas
draws blanks  but  the brush mothers
   the infantile mind
      the out of reach christmas lights
      her babe’s primary colors

12/7/2022
Contest: BiteSize Poem no56
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Janice Canerdy December 8, 2022 at 6:04 AM Expressive poem, makes great use of symbolism, Kim! Janice Kim Rodrigues December 8, 2022 at 7:09 AM Thanks, Janice! :)

Victor Buhagiar December 7, 2022 at 9:03 PM A deep thought-provoking poem. Kim Rodrigues December 8, 2022 at 4:33 AM Thank you ((hugs))