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Crabbing Ahead in Topples

Creepy the crab longed to walk straight ahead
But his lanky legs spread, side to side led.
The skips he tried were all flops
The same can be said for his hops.
But with his topples, he tumbled ahead instead.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 5:20 PM
Very hunourous John:-) The syllable count was not consistent other wise you would have placed higher:-) hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 9:12 PM
Wonderful, John, :-)
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