Limerick Contest

Bedtime Routines

A sly glance at his bathroom routine
Reveals clearly what the night would mean
If he reaches for mouthwash
He’s coming for her, oh gosh!
She promptly wipes her under arms clean

Written on:04/26/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Martin Avatar
July 6, 2017 at 1:43 PM
Great humour Sara! Congratulations! :-)
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 10:46 PM
LIked this just as much the second time. Congrats to you, Sara.
Allison Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 4:12 PM
Very clever humour Sara:-)Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Chansarkar Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 2:44 PM
Thanks Jan:)
Walker Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 7:37 PM
{chuckle} really cute and humorous :)
May Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 9:02 AM
Lol..Nice one Sara
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 3:47 PM
hahaha, Pre-ettiquete routines (I can't even spell that word any more. WHat the heck?) Etiquite? What am I doing wrong? anyway, I really like this!!
Roper Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 3:15 PM
So funny :) Sara, good luck in the contest ~*
Green Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 1:57 PM
That was really funny. I like that a lot. Best wishes in the contest
Mandani Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 1:49 PM
Well, you had it coming! Lol. Nice one.
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