Limerick 2 Contest- Bill the Barber

A long time ago lived a guy named Bill
             Barber was his trade,did bad cuts at will
                         Client's dubbed him cruel
                        Dude just broke every rule
            Eve his ex got him canned,works at gin mill




        
  
  
 
  
  
 
      
               
                          
                 
              



Inspired By Limerick 2 Contest
1-9-19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 7:51 PM
so glad to see you on this winner list. I have taken a while to get to this particular winner list. Belated Congrats, my friend.
Devonshire Avatar
January 25, 2019 at 8:11 AM
Well, Alexis, at least Bill was able to find another job. Very funny! Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn
Roper Avatar
January 24, 2019 at 5:19 PM
A great poem, Alexis congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*
Raven Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 6:54 PM
Hi Alexis, a wonderful limerick. These are hard enough to be done normally, never mind alphabetically. You have done really well. Excellent piece. A fave. a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Krutsinger Avatar
January 13, 2019 at 3:00 PM
Alexis, this is good. I had difficulty with the ABCDEFGHIJ of it. It takes a lot more energy than you think at first.You did well.
Dietrich Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 5:40 PM
WELL done, Alexis. This is not an easy challenge. I took over an hour and I still do not like mine very much (not posted yet)
Y. Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 5:47 PM
Hi Andrea, Thank you so much. It wasn't easy at all.I rewrote and revised this several times. I'm not still not 100% happy with it but I'm happy I did it. I look forward to seeing yours:-) Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 2:27 AM
Nice one Alexis, what's a barber ? I Haven't been for years lol. I thought you'd be heading away for a spell . Good luck. Tom.
Cunningham Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 2:57 AM
I'm glad you did, still working on mine, these are a lot harder to do for sure.
Y. Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 2:32 AM
Lol! I changed my mind. And I saw another limerick contest and I had to give it a go. It wasn't easy at all. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis
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