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Limerick 2 Contest- Bill the Barber

A long time ago lived a guy named Bill Barber was his trade,did bad cuts at will Client's dubbed him cruel Dude just broke every rule Eve his ex got him canned,works at gin mill Inspired By Limerick 2 Contest 1-9-19

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/26/2019 7:51:00 PM

so glad to see you on this winner list. I have taken a while to get to this particular winner list. Belated Congrats, my friend.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/25/2019 8:11:00 AM

Well, Alexis, at least Bill was able to find another job. Very funny! Congratulations on your win! Best wishes, Carolyn

Eve Roper

Date: 1/24/2019 5:19:00 PM

A great poem, Alexis congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve ~`*

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/13/2019 6:54:00 PM

Hi Alexis, a wonderful limerick. These are hard enough to be done normally, never mind alphabetically. You have done really well. Excellent piece. A fave. a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/13/2019 3:00:00 PM

Alexis, this is good. I had difficulty with the ABCDEFGHIJ of it. It takes a lot more energy than you think at first.You did well.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2019 5:40:00 PM

WELL done, Alexis. This is not an easy challenge. I took over an hour and I still do not like mine very much (not posted yet)

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/10/2019 5:47:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Thank you so much. It wasn't easy at all.I rewrote and revised this several times. I'm not still not 100% happy with it but I'm happy I did it. I look forward to seeing yours:-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/10/2019 2:27:00 AM

Nice one Alexis, what's a barber ? I Haven't been for years lol. I thought you'd be heading away for a spell . Good luck. Tom.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 1/10/2019 2:57:00 AM

I'm glad you did, still working on mine, these are a lot harder to do for sure.

Alexis Y.
Date: 1/10/2019 2:32:00 AM

Lol! I changed my mind. And I saw another limerick contest and I had to give it a go. It wasn't easy at all. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis