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Limerick 1

Poor Tom did not know how to ride, Encouraged, the first time he tried, But the horse was mad, It galloped being glad, Down the brook letting Tom to glide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/8/2020 12:28:00 PM
This is such an amazing piece with the apt sense of humour. Loved it.
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Date: 9/14/2016 9:27:00 PM
Hold the sense of humor! well done.
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Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 9/14/2016 11:03:00 PM
Thank you . :)
Date: 9/12/2016 10:59:00 AM
Your limerick made me smile Sarban:-) hugs jan xx
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Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 9/14/2016 11:04:00 PM
Thanks Jan. :)
Date: 9/10/2016 3:07:00 PM
Tom and the horse both combine to make this a witty write, Sarban! Regards // paul
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Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 9/11/2016 11:00:00 AM
Thank you, Paul !
Date: 9/10/2016 10:25:00 AM
wow, for first one, it's quite good,. the meter in first two lines was perfect!
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Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 9/11/2016 11:00:00 AM
Andrea, I thank you.
Date: 9/7/2016 4:20:00 PM
I enjoyed your limerick, Sarban:)
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Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 9/11/2016 11:01:00 AM
O I see. Thanks, Daniel.
Date: 9/7/2016 12:50:00 PM
nice one, Sarban. linda
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Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 9/7/2016 1:08:00 PM
Thanks, Linda.
Date: 9/7/2016 11:24:00 AM
Sarban,, very good. skat
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Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 9/7/2016 11:27:00 AM
Thank you, Skat.