Limerick 1

Poor Tom did not know how to ride, 
Encouraged, the first time he tried, 
But the horse was mad, 
It galloped being glad, 
Down the brook letting Tom to glide.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Mukherjee Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 12:28 PM
This is such an amazing piece with the apt sense of humour. Loved it.
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 9:27 PM
Hold the sense of humor! well done.
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 11:03 PM
Thank you . :)
Allison Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 10:59 AM
Your limerick made me smile Sarban:-) hugs jan xx
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 11:04 PM
Thanks Jan. :)
Callus Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Tom and the horse both combine to make this a witty write, Sarban! Regards // paul
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 11:00 AM
Thank you, Paul !
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 10:25 AM
wow, for first one, it's quite good,. the meter in first two lines was perfect!
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 11:00 AM
Andrea, I thank you.
Turner Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 4:20 PM
I enjoyed your limerick, Sarban:)
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 11:01 AM
O I see. Thanks, Daniel.
A   Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 12:50 PM
nice one, Sarban. linda
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 1:08 PM
Thanks, Linda.
A  Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Sarban,, very good. skat
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 7, 2016 at 11:27 AM
Thank you, Skat.
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