Limerick-04

Grand father said, " Aye! come here, here bean!" 
Grand child- smiling toothless and peeing 
stretching old wabbles 
crippling child bubbles 
One for another powerless twin!


-September 23, 2018 Chattogram
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Salehi Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 12:35 AM
Is it wabbles or wobbles? cute, nevertheless.
Bangalee Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 12:50 AM
Thanks for your reading. Wabble-verb, less common spelling of wobble.
Vaso Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 12:29 AM
I liked this! #2
Trifiatis Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 5:22 AM
Amusing dear, Mahtab!
Bangalee Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 5:46 AM
thanks SIR
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