Limerence

hungry lips kissing
petrichor of fur soft hand
touches the rain

in me the earth melts
the azure sky looks up to
face vermilion red

and green blades of grass
smells lovers' moonbeams filtered
through a glass window

willow shoot slender
I see her in a kiosk
cheeks red a first blush

makes a pigeon fly
from dark alley of the shop
to lodge on my heart 



Contest Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron
Theme: Limerence 
Poet: RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY
18/07/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 7/20/2016 2:58:00 PM
Great use of color and the senses in your lovely poem, Rajat! Good luck in the contest:)
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Date: 7/19/2016 4:52:00 AM
A wonderful necklace of Senryu dear, Rajat. Good luck and a seven!
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Date: 7/18/2016 6:18:00 PM
Love the imagery, Rajat. and good luck in the contest. You might want to take your name of the contest they are not allowing us to put names in the contest poems so they can judge blind.
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Date: 7/18/2016 3:57:00 PM
You really got across the "feel" of that word, Rajat. Everyone that sees MY Limerence poem keeps asking what limerence means. Good grief!!
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Date: 7/18/2016 12:28:00 PM
Nice lines:) good luck...
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