Limerence

hungry lips kissing petrichor of fur soft hand touches the rain in me the earth melts the azure sky looks up to face vermilion red and green blades of grass smells lovers' moonbeams filtered through a glass window willow shoot slender I see her in a kiosk cheeks red a first blush makes a pigeon fly from dark alley of the shop to lodge on my heart Contest Sponsored by: Nayda Ivette Negron Theme: Limerence Poet: RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY 18/07/2016

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Laura Leiser

Date: 7/20/2016 2:58:00 PM

Great use of color and the senses in your lovely poem, Rajat! Good luck in the contest:)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/19/2016 4:52:00 AM

A wonderful necklace of Senryu dear, Rajat. Good luck and a seven!

Eve Roper

Date: 7/18/2016 6:18:00 PM

Love the imagery, Rajat. and good luck in the contest. You might want to take your name of the contest they are not allowing us to put names in the contest poems so they can judge blind.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2016 3:57:00 PM

You really got across the "feel" of that word, Rajat. Everyone that sees MY Limerence poem keeps asking what limerence means. Good grief!!

Madhupriya Shanmugam

Date: 7/18/2016 12:28:00 PM

Nice lines:) good luck...