Limbless Love 1

Limbless Love

Light gone and then sound,
Romancing darkness at hand,
I cheat night again,
Courting your formless fondness
Embracing  your  love, limbless.

@ 05/ Nov/2012 

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

For PD's Any November poem contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 1:15 PM
Congratulations on your "November Poem" contest win Jag. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2012 at 6:03 PM
glad to see this gem on the winners list, Jag. BIG congrats to you.
Song Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 2:59 PM
Hey hey! Congrats, Jagath! You took a sensitive subject and filleted your heart right open...great poetry. I knew PD would appreciate this one! gwendolen
Arowolo Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 2:11 PM
Wonderful piece,S.J.Congratulations on your well deserved win...
Gasun Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, SJ. love/hugs, Leonora
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 27, 2012 at 1:39 AM
Congratulations Jag on yet another winning place xx
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November 26, 2012 at 9:40 PM
Jag, . Congratulations :-) with your winning poem.. Thank you for the awesome NOVEMBER'S poem entry...pd
Wesley Avatar
November 9, 2012 at 3:55 PM
But we need those limbs, how else to wrap the victim Jag?
Song Avatar
November 10, 2012 at 6:17 PM
gotta love Lizzie's way of thinking!
Song Avatar
November 7, 2012 at 12:28 PM
Hey this is my second read of yours today...with all sensations exposed, this one cuts right down to the heart!! Positively great work, Jag!! Ps...the cat and mouse pic from the U tube u forwarded to me (from Lizzie) is what inspired that write for Autumn Air...I am glad u enjoyed it...I digested that pic for 2 wks and then took a dif twist! :) Trying to get Lizzie to write about that electric bike!! haha..peace to u! gwendolen
Nair Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 6:32 AM
;)
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 3:09 PM
very interesting one. I love the imagery of this.
Ishmael Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 8:06 AM
some times we hurt the ones we love ,by saying the right thing at the wrong time,when all we had in mind was good intensions
Horsman Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 3:48 AM
Wow Jag this is deep, and such a wonderful Tanka, like this...
Andresen Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 2:23 AM
Started my day with your beautiful poem Jag, thank you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Nair Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 2:31 AM
Thank u. have a great day, Anne Lise..
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