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- Lily Scent -

Liv`s lilies

                                        bending toward the sun

                                 throws colors all over the garden

                                   Not a cloud obscured the sky ...

                                              A simple touch

                                             Upright in honor

                                        I could hear them sigh

                                If gorgeous colors are going astray

                                     ... you can find them here

                                      along the road with roads







                                              18/07/2021
                                      Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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(Liv - a Norwegian woman's name)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 4:44 AM
Your imagery is fabulous Anne-Lise " I could hear them sigh" Ahhhhhhhh
Daniel Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 1:47 AM
They sure look beautiful and exuberant, Anne-lise, good poem:)
Theraven Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 9:06 PM
Hello Anne-Lise, Wonderful sigh in this Verse. -Richard
Skelly Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 10:51 AM
Lilies suggest everything that is beautiful, just like your poem...Delice
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 11:48 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Delice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kulkarni Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 10:44 AM
Beautiful words just like the colorful lilies you have described!
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 11:48 AM
- Smita, many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 10:38 AM
Those lilies are beautiful, Anne-Lise, and I am sure they are the type that can capture our attention with their rich fragrance! ~ Regards & Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 11:47 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mchattie Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 4:00 PM
The unit beside us is rented out for the summer. Within a week, their children had destroyed all our lilies. My wife is not happy. Wonderful poem. Stay well my friend.
Andresen Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 11:47 AM
- So sad - Many thanks for your comments, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcintosh Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 3:03 AM
I love them. These are glorious. God bless you and prayers for many more beautiful flowers in your heart. Love, Gina
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 10:07 AM
- Many thanks for your lovely comments, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buhagiar Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 11:17 PM
Lilies are so beautiful and colorful, although I prefer the white ones. And there are so many varieties, some fragrant, some not. A cute poem, Anne Lise. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 10:06 AM
- Colorful flowers are like the rainbow, Victor ... make us happy :) - Many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 6:23 PM
Love the smell of lilies, beautiful imagery and flow, Sunshine. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 10:03 AM
- A scent of summer, Eve :) - Many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ball Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 5:22 PM
Lovely Anne-Lise. I have many lilies in my garden. Love it when they bloom. My Peruvian lilies and starting to bloom now. Just love them. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 10:02 AM
- Enjoy your garden while it is in bloom, Judy :) - Thank you very much for the visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Thirtyseven Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 4:33 PM
beautiful, your words bring as much colour as the flowers themselves.
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 10:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Scott :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Buehler Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 4:00 PM
Like the flower, your poem so rich in imagery, is exotic and lovely. It's in my faves. Hugs :) Evelyn
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 10:00 AM
- A fave is always a pleasure ... really appreciate it Evelyn, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 3:24 PM
Gorgeous colors-- and so is your poem, Anne-Lise. Beautifully done.
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 9:58 AM
- Thanks, Vijay ... really appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 3:07 PM
Lovely poem with many beautiful colors and stunning words// Have a great evening and warm hugs Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 9:57 AM
- Many thanks for your comments, Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 2:54 PM
absolutely delightful sweet sunshine smile, I grown stargazer lilies in my garden the scent is so exotic and the colour is divine like your poem:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 9:57 AM
- My lilies were beautiful last year ... but, not this year ... I have to plant them somewhere else in the autumn ... - Many thanks for your comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Merryman Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 2:06 PM
A delightful verse, Anne-Lise! I love colorful lilies! Blessings, Kim M
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 9:55 AM
Thanks, Kim ... really appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 12:48 PM
Beautiful flowers they are too Anne, and look even better with a cloudless sky. Tom
Andresen Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 1:02 PM
- She is so proud of them ... she has 97 lilies ... and they are really beautiful - But, it was not a cloudless sky today ... (I lied :))) - Many thanks for your comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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