Lily Pad

herald the blossom
born from koi pond's womb  ~
      frog on lily pad

naturehaiku

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Constance La France

March 24, 2021 at 3:25 PM

Jenna, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative With Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this wonderful non traditional Haiku, well done _Constance

Line Gauthier

March 23, 2021 at 5:23 PM

charming, Jenna ~

Jenna Logan

March 24, 2021 at 6:11 AM

Thanks, Line.

Jan Allison

March 22, 2021 at 7:00 PM

dropping back with many congrats Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan

March 24, 2021 at 6:10 AM

thanks, Jan, but not feeling the need for congrats.

Kim Merryman

March 22, 2021 at 4:40 PM

Nicely done, Jenna! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Susan Ashley

March 22, 2021 at 2:41 PM

Dearest Jenna, I am so happy to return with congratulations for your wonderful win in Constance’s contest with your superb haiku. Warmest wishes for you, my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Jenna Logan

March 24, 2021 at 6:10 AM

I thank you for your positive thoughts, Susan.

Andrea Dietrich

March 22, 2021 at 2:20 PM

wow, this is GREAT KU!! Congrats in the contest.

Jenna Logan

March 24, 2021 at 6:09 AM

Thanks, Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 22, 2021 at 12:58 PM

- Back with a congratulations, Jenna :)

Jenna Logan

March 24, 2021 at 6:09 AM

Thanks a lot, Anne-Lise.

Mark Koplin

March 21, 2021 at 6:09 PM

Spot on! Love the Pic!

Jenna Logan

March 24, 2021 at 6:08 AM

Thank you so much.

Susan Ashley

March 20, 2021 at 10:23 AM

Dear Jenna, you capture the beauty of the moment with poetic finesse. Splendid imagery! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley

March 20, 2021 at 12:12 PM

You’re welcome! Thank you, my lovely friend, your kind words embrace me. Unfortunately, the busy-ness of life had kept me away from my muse, PS and my favorite friends and poetesses like you, Jenna. I have missed the beauty of your pen for sure. I hope to now be here on a more consistent basis again. Hugs sent your way :)

Jenna Logan

March 20, 2021 at 12:00 PM

Susan, where have you been? I've missed your wonderful comments and your splendid poetry. Thank you for reading me.