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Lily of the Valley

lily of the valley swaying bells so tiny pristine dangle perfumed april breezes praying lily of the valley swaying emerald foliage dancing prized beauty from every angle lily of the valley swaying bells so tiny pristine dangle AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on May 5, 2019 for contest CELEBRATE MAY WITH A TRIOLET (TREE-O-LAY) sponsored by ANDREA DIETRICH

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 5/21/2019 8:59:00 PM

I like this one and I like your win!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/21/2019 11:06:00 PM

Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/18/2019 5:14:00 PM

what beautiful imagery Line, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/18/2019 5:34:00 PM

Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.

Joseph May

Date: 5/17/2019 3:36:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this lovely write Line...

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/17/2019 5:24:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph. Most appreciated.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/17/2019 3:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win, Line. As Andrea said, this could have placed even higher. ~ Regards...and have a nice weekend. // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/17/2019 3:14:00 PM

Thanks, Paul. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2019 6:17:00 PM

Line , your triolet is very pretty. It would have scored higher if you had not used the word dancing at the end of one of the lines. Congrats for your win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/15/2019 6:27:00 PM

I understand, it's a poor rhyme. I appreciate your feedback, Andrea. Thanks for the fun challenge.