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Lily of the Valley

lily of the valley swaying
bells so tiny pristine dangle 
perfumed april breezes praying
lily of the valley swaying
emerald foliage dancing
prized beauty from every angle
lily of the valley swaying
bells so tiny pristine dangle



AP:  Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on May 5, 2019 for contest CELEBRATE MAY WITH A TRIOLET (TREE-O-LAY) sponsored by ANDREA DIETRICH

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Timothy Mcguire Date: 5/21/2019 8:59:00 PM I like this one and I like your win! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/21/2019 11:06:00 PM Thank you so much, Timothy. Most appreciated.

Jan Allison Date: 5/18/2019 5:14:00 PM what beautiful imagery Line, congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/18/2019 5:34:00 PM Thanks, Jan. Much appreciated.

Joseph May Date: 5/17/2019 3:36:00 PM Congrats on your win with this lovely write Line... Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/17/2019 5:24:00 PM Thank you, Joseph. Most appreciated.

Paul Callus Date: 5/17/2019 3:08:00 PM Congratulations on your fine win, Line. As Andrea said, this could have placed even higher. ~ Regards...and have a nice weekend. // paul Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/17/2019 3:14:00 PM Thanks, Paul. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/15/2019 6:17:00 PM Line , your triolet is very pretty. It would have scored higher if you had not used the word dancing at the end of one of the lines. Congrats for your win. Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/15/2019 6:27:00 PM I understand, it's a poor rhyme. I appreciate your feedback, Andrea. Thanks for the fun challenge.

Caren Krutsinger Date: 5/8/2019 11:18:00 AM Those dainty bells; so solidly bringing in May with the most marvelous attitude! Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/8/2019 11:44:00 AM Absolutely. Thanks, Caren.

Briauna Brown Date: 5/7/2019 3:17:00 AM Lovely imagery painting the lily of the valley! Best wishes in the triolet contest! XOXO - Briauna Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/7/2019 6:25:00 AM Thanks for your much apprecaited visit and comment, Briauna.

Susan Ashley Date: 5/5/2019 6:30:00 PM Enchanting imagery, Line. Wonderfully done. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan Login to Reply Line Gauthier Date: 5/5/2019 6:47:00 PM Thank you, Susan. Most appreciated.