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A poem of hope and validation for my granddaughter

Little Lilo your life is Off to a fine start Your art and your heart Will set you apart Ones who love you Will offer their thoughts Choosing the right way That's wisdom they say You'll do something special one day Don't let it sweep you away Keep grounded and true Always knowing the real you Off with you now You're on your way Greet life with a wow Savor each day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/6/2018 5:52:00 AM
Aww. Very special! Touched my heart.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 6/6/2018 9:40:00 AM
I figure if we can't talk to our own, how can we ever touch the hearts of others? Thanks for your kindness. Hugs to you.

Book: Shattered Sighs