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2nd placement

Lilith poetry contest

31/05/2024

Silent one sponsored

 

 

he would have known or suspected that smooth beauty he kissed so often, had a different side that he did not reach, scales that glistened in the darkest of nights, under the lights of distant stars and galaxies, her smile had fangs when he did not see, and her innocence was lethal when she kissed, and her eyes could role to be pure white bobs, when she was brewing her cunning schemes. pink tongue in love, but forked in conscience, He would have known or suspected that she was an extension of Lucifer, a damsel to trap the unwary and feed them to the devil who waited in the shadows. Adam and Lilith parted and why? we do not know, but Adam was destined to be with Eve, to be tempted and carry the sins of mankind, and to create history that we know… But Lilith is still around and may appear as a man or a woman, you may meet Lilith in your life, you may know or suspect like Adam, but you will never know for sure…. when you are in love you may not see the fangs behind a smile, that are polished by a forked tongue.

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Date: 6/14/2024 8:48:00 AM
Krish, such an engaging read, with a lasting conclusion. Well Done Krish
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/14/2024 9:53:00 AM
Thanks my Friend for your reading and appreciation! Delighted!!:)
Date: 6/13/2024 9:33:00 AM
"when you are in love you may not see the fangs behind a smile, that are polished by a forked tongue." - Grand truth. Congratulations!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/13/2024 9:41:00 AM
Thanks my friend! Good to hear from you! I have been away from these pages for sometime, shall catch up with your poems!
Date: 6/12/2024 12:50:00 PM
Very good arrangement of words in your poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/12/2024 2:03:00 PM
@Silent One, Thanks for this placement in your extraordinary contest! Never would have known about her otherwise!!
Date: 6/2/2024 10:38:00 AM
You make Lilith so scary and so attractive at the same time. This is awesome. I love it so much.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/2/2024 11:39:00 AM
@Funom Thanks Very much for your appreciative words! God bless!!
Date: 5/31/2024 12:08:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your powerful write. Love the ending. Lucifer is still around so Watch Out... "Good Luck'" Have A Great/Blessed ~ Day/Weekend Writing Away................
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/31/2024 1:52:00 PM
Thanks Paula, for your kind read and your lovely words! Much obliged!!:)

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