Lilith

The female named Lilith is not a woman with whom to be caught. Lust she induces. Fools she seduces, for she’s beautiful and she’s hot. This Lilith’s a demon, they say - a feminist icon today. What stupidity. No validity can be found for this myth anyway!

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Silent One

Date: 6/12/2024 1:05:00 PM

Nice idea to do limericks Andrea.. they flow really well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/11/2024 10:43:00 AM

Interesting lines penned. I don't think I would want to know Lilith. Sara K

Jack Horne

Date: 6/5/2024 6:44:00 AM

LOL, yes, many would agree with that, for sure

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/3/2024 6:25:00 AM

Andrea, OMG, too funny. You certainly came down hard on this particular myth. I think I can understand why. It wouldn't be so bad if men could behave and not be swept away by looks. Biologically, there's some kind of brain hit (like with an addictive drug) that external beauty in a woman can induce in a man's brain. We have to learn to control these addictions, but it's hard not to stare, for example. This is such an interesting topic!!

John Lawless

Date: 5/30/2024 5:52:00 AM

nice use of the limerick Andrea, a subtle twist on the theme