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! I NO LONGER HAVE THIS DEAR PET. I NOW HAVE A BLACK CAT NAMED RAZZMATAZZ!

Lilah Vampira

(a swap quatrain rhyme)

She likes to nip; she likes to lick.
My foot might get a little prick.
I’ll see it’s her. That little pip!
She likes to lick. She likes to nip.

Attacking me with small cat teeth,
she comes at me from underneath.
She bites my toes so sneakily
with small cat teeth, attacking me!

In her small mind, it’s just a game,
but I don’t like it all the same!
To nip and run, my cat’s inclined.
It’s just a game in her small mind.

A paper scrap she’ll start to shred.
And when I wish that she, instead,
would come and sit upon my lap,
she’ll start to shred a paper scrap! 

In moments sweet, she licks my hand.
Those times are fleeting and unplanned,
but for her mistress, they’re a treat.
She licks my hand in moments sweet.

She gives a lick.  She gives a nip;
I’d rather feel her small tongue’s tip
upon my skin than one small snick.
She gives a nip; she gives a lick.

for Brian Strand's 'COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE (6)any form any theme' Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Allison Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 1:32 PM
Dropping by to say many congrats on your win Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
December 31, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Ha, ha. Likes to lick and likes to nip, eh?! Sounds like it could be a cat as well. LOL. Congrats on your win in the contest with this 'oldie but goodie,' Andrea. Happy 2019, Gershon
Ebbs Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 11:23 AM
Sweet, good job, congrats!
Tor Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 6:30 PM
Cute Andrea those little bites hurt. Lol. Congratulations on your win.
Haight Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 2:45 PM
Very sweet, Andrea. You captured her personality for sure! Congrats on your win. Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 9:22 AM
Very sweet write on ur cat Andrea! Form complimenting further, congrats on superb win!
Cheema Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 1:42 AM
Very very sweet quatrain, Andrea! Congrats on your win!
Woods    Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 11:24 PM
This is a real cool poem, we used to have a cat that did similar and had the nasty habit of jumping off the fence onto our heads in the dark! Congrats on your win
Y. Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 10:33 PM
Andrea, I enjoyed this well written tribute to your pet cat. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
Williams Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 7:32 PM
Very well written. It brought a smile to my face. Congrats on your win.
May Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 6:57 PM
I love the way you wrote this poem with the reverse lines...Congrats on a great win!
Allison Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 5:47 PM
what a charming poem Andrea and such a gorgeous picture congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Campbell Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 5:42 PM
Andrea, We both love cats. Wally also bites, but much less than when he was younger. I loved the rhyming and I believe you captured Lilah's cat traits well. Congratulations on your winning poem! Barbara
Brown Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 10:26 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in poet Destroyer's "Best Pet Or Animal Poem" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 2:03 PM
LOL cats are SO individuals I had forgotten Ole Rocky who passed was a nipper for years!! Sweet memory Andie congrad's Light & Love
Hendricks Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 10:19 AM
Awwww, Lilah's a little imp. She's lucky to have you as her mother. Nice meter and rhyme here, Andrea. Congratulations on your well-deserved placement. :-)
Dailey Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 4:54 AM
I really liked this poem. It reminded me of little kittens I had as a child. MIke
Song Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 11:11 PM
Great prize-winning poem here, Andrea. What a lil mischievous kitty u have in this poem! My oh my! Great form and rhythmic like rhyme. Gwendolen
Horne Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 1:34 PM
LOL, just like my dog Paddy was as a puppy. Congrats to you, Andrea : )
A  Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 12:56 PM
great job in contest Luv*Skat
Phookan Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 12:37 PM
Cho Chweeeet...!!! I'm reading so many cat poems today..Bob's, chris' and yours ,now I'm starting to feel like I'm the only one on this planet without this pet.pd has so many..gonna rectify this error..Congrats Andrea on your win ... love, gautami
Mehta Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of p.d., Andrea
Devonshire Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 8:57 AM
Dear Andrea, Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest! I remember this poem well. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 8:15 AM
Congrats Andrea on another terrific win with this wonderful write my friend.. lots of luv..
Eastman Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 7:45 AM
The nips may hurt but they make a great poem. Congrstulations on the win.
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