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Lilac Wisps

Her silken fibers radiate embellishing the sky, ornate; droplets tap with a freshened mirth-- as rainfall lush, glints of rebirth. Enchanting the breath to hold dear the lilac smell of her cashmere hearts drenching to clasp the night’s girth--- as rainfall lush glints of rebirth. On flavoured twirl, lovers desire to mambo with the tang of spire; gust’s misty wisps trill, a cool perch... as rainfall lush glints of rebirth. Her silken fibers radiate, as rainfall lush, glints of rebirth. Kyrielle Sonnet Fragrance Of Rain: Nette Onclaud 11/14/13 Jajosh Ongado

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Date: 11/25/2013 9:37:00 PM
Beautiful, Jajosh! Congrats on your wonderful first place win! Love and Blessings
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Date: 11/23/2013 3:18:00 PM
Impressive winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/22/2013 12:47:00 PM
Wow! I love your word choices, Jajosh. Congrats!
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Date: 11/20/2013 8:02:00 AM
lovely sonnet JO congrats on fine win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/19/2013 9:16:00 PM
Jajosh, , Congratulations on your beautiful FRAGRANCE OF RAIN poem... Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/19/2013 8:20:00 PM
I love kyrielle sonnets. Good one, this is exactly the kind of poetic language that appeals to Nette. Easy to see why this is a big winner. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/19/2013 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Jajosh
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