Premiere Contest WinnerLilac Lagoon


Sprawling aspiration 
effervescent incandescence 
spreads psychic plasma
of primal spectrum 
painting passion 
on the silken sky
the configured
fascinated facsimile
of mental panorama
suffused with chromatic 
sublime sensitivity  
of exuberant ecstasy 
blooming in
seraphic color blast
of floral spring  

Parched pieces
draped by distress dust 
of cinnamon ground 
heart desiccates 
to the core 
auburn anguish
pervading passive
creeps craftily
in the wilted veins 
of the fallen leaves
fragile essence
rustles restive
with emerald tune
of serenading sanguinity  

Emotive eyes weep 
concealed tears 
in torment torrent
fill the cauldron 
of pent up pathos 
forlorn life’s 
desolate distillate
designs crystalline
verdance shining  
in the jade thicket 
on the eroded banks 
of awareness 
as symphonic cadence  
of fervent zephyr 
drifting with sonata
of fleeting fervor 
from yonder plateau 
of yearning
pulsates timeless
with waves of rhapsody 
in the bay of bliss
glides with the melody
of harmonic heart 
with the ripples 
of lilac lagoon
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Farookh Avatar
February 26, 2024 at 8:48 PM
Congratulations, SSR. It was simply sublime. Beautifully expressed and painted with colours. It was a joy to read your winning poem.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 12:12 AM
thank ylou for your visit and for nice comments.
Ashley Avatar
February 26, 2024 at 6:20 PM
Dear Subimal, emotion and imagery flow with tender yet intense poetic expression. Wonderful sparkles of alliterations and lovely use of color serve to enhance the beauty of your poem with effective charm. Congratulations for you gleaming trophy win in Brain's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 12:11 AM
Belated thank you, Susan. Your comments encourages me beyond measure.
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