Lil' Spring Flowers

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And along came the lil’ Spring flowers
  in there 'mong the springing grass

      Distended visions before me
           as if I were not there

                In the garden
                     yesss
          the flowers did belong   
           and I at the distance
                     yesss
              where I did fit in

             I felt the soft heat
                       and 
                 that scream

                 “it’s Spring”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/19/2012 2:30:00 PM
It sounds good to me James..
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Date: 5/9/2012 1:37:00 PM
We also have flowers in our front lawn, lots of nice yellow flowers, flowers that become these strange white umbrellas and blow all the hell over everywhere. Enjoyed mucho. LOve, daver
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Date: 5/8/2012 5:18:00 PM
Where did you fit in? You are the scent that defines the season. Maybe you are the bee that kisses each flower or you could be the rain that bring life. Whatever; you are an important part of any season James and your poems are always up to snuff! :) Love, Lizzie
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Date: 5/7/2012 12:21:00 PM
delighted by the fascination of your words... spring welcomes you, james!.. winning huggs..:)
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Date: 5/7/2012 7:01:00 AM
Good to know that you are excited about spring..Just about six weeks now until the first day of summer..Summertime, summertime, sum sum summetime..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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Date: 5/7/2012 5:37:00 AM
James , yep great feeling..David
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