Lil' Blue, Our Favorite Christmas Tree

It was nothing but a tiny Blue Spruce,
                 lil’ Blue never grew to be tall enough for Eve-
Each branch withered, each blade loose, 
           all the other Spruces couldn’t believe. 
So, one day the lil' Blue did leave. 

        He ventured out into the cold with might, 
he knew not of anything warm or comfy-
             He was standing crooked under the moonlight, 
when he met eyes with no one but me. 
   It was like lil' Blue was finally a good tree. 

        He was sad looking, not very pretty, 
but with him I felt a strange connection-
     We talked; he was silly and witty,
so, we walked and made a pine cone collection.
               It was his time to shine, his resurrection. 

I brought him home and the lights I strung, 
       tinsel and handmade ornaments were placed-
On the tip of his frail head an angel I hung, 
you should’ve seen the look upon his face!
               It was a look of joy no one could replace. 

       The next morning down came my daughter, 
she was excited to see a tree full of joy-
                She saw beauty, because compassion I taught her, 
she’d rather have a Christmas tree than any toy.
   My puppy smelled lil' Blue and smiled; good boy. 

Christmas ended and lil' Blue started to get sad, 
        he knew it was time to go back to the woods-
For it was the best Christmas he ever had, 
  and with pitiful eyes he just stood. 
Then I wondered, “hmmm, what if I could?”

           So, I dug a huge hole in the yard for lil’ Blue,
planted him with care and love for our family-
   It was a miracle, ten feet tall he grew,
he laughed with happiness and thanked me. 
                            He was part of us now…our favorite Blue Spruce tree.



Christmas Tree Contest
Shadow Hamilton
December 9, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hamilton Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 4:22 PM
a heart warming saga Laura and a worthy winner superb hugs
Barden Avatar
December 17, 2017 at 3:51 AM
Congrats on your win, Laura - Loved this! Merry Christmas to you and yours! :-)
Talbot Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 3:54 AM
Congratulations, Laura, you gave a tree a second chance, that is a lesson for all to learn. Best wishes for ever, Mick
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 10:15 PM
Congratulations, Laura on your great win with a fabulous poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 3:52 PM
A lovely story, Luloo! That tiny blue spruce grew a fine family! Congrats!!
Roper Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 2:48 PM
Beautiful write, Laura, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 1:42 PM
Very beautiful Christmas story Laura!:)) Awesome!Enjoyed it!And very Merry Christmas to you and yours my dear friend! Good luck in the contest!:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D.
Scars Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 5:15 AM
awww thank you sweet Dorian!! Be blessed! :)
Warrior Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 11:15 PM
Wow, what a tree...great Christmas tree story Laura...best of luck... god bless and happy holidays my friend...^WW^
Scars Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 9:00 AM
awww you too!!! thank you :)
Wanter Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 5:12 PM
I just adore this poem. I fantasize that trees have personalities. This is a favorite for me for sure.
Scars Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 9:00 AM
thank you sweet Sunlite:)
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