Michelle Prital Poet Senryu

Likea Lemon

Wet warm juicy fresh
                                                            First kiss anticipation
                                                              Whet my appetite

                                                           Sixth grade pucker up
                                                  All seeds pits pulp skin and core
                                                            Tasted like tennis balls

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Poet Destroyer A August 26, 2012 at 8:01 PM MITCHLL, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. :-) Always~PD

Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2012 at 12:44 PM :) :) lol......No good at all..... *Senryu is well done. oxox love Anne-Lise

Daver Austin December 3, 2011 at 11:11 AM Ah, that first kiss. I tried it, her lips I missed. A true story. I like these short forms, Haiku and Senryu. I just sent one in to the soup. Love, yours. daver