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Like Veins of Life

This skeletal tree
Against a sunset backdrop
Silhouetted veins




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April 13, 2010 at 8:48 PM

Good use of alliteration and imagery for a wonderful poem. So creative. Keep up the good writing!!!!! Karen

Jimmy Anderson

April 12, 2010 at 3:09 PM

Hey James! Congratulations on your win and thnx for reading and leaving those kind comments on my writes...it means a whole lot to me...Maybe we could work on a couple of poems? ....Jimmy

Sara Kendrick

April 12, 2010 at 1:09 PM

Great Haiku that I can picture in my mind...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 12, 2010 at 7:08 AM

what a unique take this is , James :)! Love the concept of silhouetted veins! Very nice :) thanks for all your comments :)

Doris Culverhouse

April 11, 2010 at 5:06 PM

I like your ideas is this for the picture of Gareths.

Faleshia Murphy

April 11, 2010 at 1:50 PM

very nice write love your haikus thank you for your kind comments faleshia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 11, 2010 at 1:41 PM

Cool and interesting as only the Highlander can wrtie ... imagery and visual beauty... is it for another contest far off in the sunset of the Soup? luv.. "Sweetheart"

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