Like Veins of Life

This skeletal tree Against a sunset backdrop Silhouetted veins http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-8.php

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Date: 4/13/2010 8:48:00 PM

Good use of alliteration and imagery for a wonderful poem. So creative. Keep up the good writing!!!!! Karen

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 4/12/2010 3:09:00 PM

Hey James! Congratulations on your win and thnx for reading and leaving those kind comments on my writes...it means a whole lot to me...Maybe we could work on a couple of poems? ....Jimmy

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/12/2010 1:09:00 PM

Great Haiku that I can picture in my mind...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/12/2010 7:08:00 AM

what a unique take this is , James :)! Love the concept of silhouetted veins! Very nice :) thanks for all your comments :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/11/2010 5:06:00 PM

I like your ideas is this for the picture of Gareths.

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/11/2010 1:50:00 PM

very nice write love your haikus thank you for your kind comments faleshia

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/11/2010 1:41:00 PM

Cool and interesting as only the Highlander can wrtie ... imagery and visual beauty... is it for another contest far off in the sunset of the Soup? luv.. "Sweetheart"