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Like The Sun

Like the sun awakened, from slumber grey
Blessing every tortured fray
embraced  my soul, your glorious gaze
and set my lonely heart ablaze
like the sun amass  a brand new morn
upon your whispered wind was born
our love, till endless ages sworn
like sun enveloped, rainy days
you devoured all my hopeless haze…
and since dost now my heart amaze
with joy and laughter, lifes’ rephrase
but like the sun,twas time to set, 
now life dost seem just wretched fret
sunless days chase moonless night
drifting along alas lonely plight
A Godly gift you were to thee
rewarding every desperate plea 
now I must sail amidst raging sea
blind to hithers destiny.
But I shall rise above the moon
Amidst the troubled waters swoon
For love like ours it strengthens mast
To ride relenting waters vast
Till time dost ask for my return
To the place my tethered soul doth yearn
And all my cares shall be set free
your womb my love this soul shall flee
where thine was always meant to be
in Heavens Grace… Eternally

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/24/2013 3:27:00 PM
full of hope, grace and beauty, my friend.
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Date: 4/4/2013 6:06:00 PM
AWE, YOUR POEM JUST GAVE ME HOPE... I love the way you appreciate and exposed the sun. I to one day will reunite with my love ones. Eternally sounds good about now.. xox~Linda
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Date: 3/14/2013 5:33:00 PM
Bernard big congrats on your win, keep writing, the glimmer of light does get bigger...well done....David
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Date: 3/7/2013 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations on a great poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Bernard Colasurdo
Date: 3/12/2013 9:46:00 PM
Thank You Joyce for your kind words. It's exciting as it is my first contest ever. Never imagined one of my poems would be taken seriously by the Poetry Soup community, Blessings, Bernard
Date: 3/7/2013 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Bernard xx
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Bernard Colasurdo
Date: 3/29/2013 1:38:00 AM
Thank you Mandy, don't know how I missed this reply sorry. good to hear from you
Date: 3/7/2013 8:20:00 AM
Very elaborate brilliant write. Congrats on the win.
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Bernard Colasurdo
Date: 3/12/2013 10:00:00 PM
Thank You Carol, this was my first contest ,so very exciting to be recognized. Blessings to you, Bernard
Date: 3/7/2013 1:47:00 AM
Bernard congrats on your win. Connie
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Bernard Colasurdo
Date: 3/12/2013 10:02:00 PM
Thank You Connie, for the congrats, this win was shocking to me but so rewarding as I am new to this... Be well, Bernard
Date: 3/6/2013 9:48:00 PM
Bernard, ;-) congratulations with your sweet and awesome win, in my any poem goes contest. Good Night~ LINDA
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Bernard Colasurdo
Date: 3/12/2013 9:56:00 PM
Thank you Linda for giving me the opportunity to show my work and be acknowledged. It is such a blessing to be recognized by Poetry Soup. This is all new to me and I am really enjoying this new found ability. Thanks again, blessings, Bernard
Date: 3/2/2013 7:13:00 AM
Hi Bernard i see oyu are still writing from your heart my friend and making a very good job of it... I hope you are coming to terms a little with your loss now but it must be very hard for you.. keep writing you do it so well xx
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Bernard Colasurdo
Date: 3/12/2013 9:51:00 PM
Thank you Mandy, I am better in certain ways but still struggling with my emotions. I imagine I will for quite a while yet, but I will keep writing from my heart that is broken. It seems that is where I get my creativity from so i am going with it for now. God bless, and Thank you again, Bernard