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love is always loving you she says like the ocean loves the waves but the road to your heart is rough a/f not for the faint of it's dangerous, too not many would dare so many beautiful places blocked by so many rock slides you can't get through is it too much work to clear the way or easier just not to feel love is always loving you she says like the ocean loves the waves

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Date: 1/9/2025 12:12:00 PM
The simplicity of your poem is beautiful with raw emotional depth. My favorite line: is it too much work / to clear the way / or easier / to just not feel, is especially striking, it is vulnerable and at the same time thought-provoking.
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Steven Young
Date: 1/9/2025 12:37:00 PM
Thanks :) I'm encouraged! Writing poems is clearing the way. I just realized that today

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