Like the Haphazard Mosquito...

Like the haphazard mosquito that
flew right into your mouth, the
news i got today
said you died
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 3:48 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Misheel. I wish you the best always. Love, Carol
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July 6, 2010 at 12:32 PM
oh,, good one,, like the fly who died meaning the fly died in his mouth and died?? ,, and you have some not so good news making you mad to prefer that person dead??,, well I read it twice and that's what I percieved lol,, enjoyed...P.D.
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July 6, 2010 at 12:05 PM
hope it was not true, I think I am still breathing...LOL
Kendrick Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 9:54 AM
Interesting choice of metaphoric language in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Don't know whether to laugh or cry...Sara
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