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Like the Haphazard Mosquito...

Like the haphazard mosquito that flew right into your mouth, the news i got today said you died

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/7/2010 3:48:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Misheel. I wish you the best always. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/6/2010 12:32:00 PM

oh,, good one,, like the fly who died meaning the fly died in his mouth and died?? ,, and you have some not so good news making you mad to prefer that person dead??,, well I read it twice and that's what I percieved lol,, enjoyed...P.D.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/6/2010 12:05:00 PM

hope it was not true, I think I am still breathing...LOL

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/6/2010 9:54:00 AM

Interesting choice of metaphoric language in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Don't know whether to laugh or cry...Sara