Like the First Night

Father had ills
couldn't even get up
not even eat
spoke properly
didn't go to the bathroom
She took care of him at home
for many years
without complaint
setting the dining table for seventy years
Today, after burying husband
first night
Mom lying in father's bed
fell asleep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Gayagay Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 6:11 PM
Oh, what a sad picture. But a well-written poem.
Rolland Avatar
April 5, 2023 at 6:36 AM
this is so sensitive, emotionnal and rewarding for mam, thanks
Wolf Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 6:25 PM
I like the 'full circle' of the narrative, Yonah, Mom's deserved 'just desserts.'
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