Like Slow Water

He sat there in the dark corner of the bar
Alone and lost in his thoughts
Surrounded by the smell of stale alcohol and regret.

Drink had become a bottomless crystal that allowed him
to look down the endless corridors of his mind
And listen to echos of memories trapped forever
Within his soul.

He remembered nights when twilight crept silently
Over the world like a cheetah seeking its prey
And love came caressing his cheek like the nuzzle
of a gentle lamb.

She was his music
But he did not hear
She was honey
But he did not taste.
She was life
And he let it slip away.

Now days seemed to fly as
Swiftly as the eagle 
Seeking its nest 
At sundown.

And there he sits night after night
Alone and lost in his dream
Of falling into her
Like slow water.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Rigoler Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 10:08 AM
I like the "slow water" ending to this problem many have, Gene. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / Maurice
Mariani Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 5:36 PM
Once again, Maurice, I thank you for your kind comments. For what it may be worth, I wrote this piece as a challenge. A good friend challenged me to write a poem using the words "cheetah, lamb, and eagle." It took some time, this is the result.
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