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Like Salt It Pours

Ocean waters now white capping 
Cool breeze 'pon the shore
Every plant drips rain water
Then like Morton salt pours  

Thursday, June 06, 2013

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Nette Onclaud

June 23, 2013 at 1:51 PM

wow...creatively done with allusions to Morton lime frost...grrreat one, sara..:) huggs

John Posey

June 23, 2013 at 5:17 AM

I can always find the genius of Sara somewhere in the Soup... I really enjoy your talented entries.... Hugs.... Jake

Lucilla Carrillo

June 22, 2013 at 4:54 PM

Hi Sara; This is short, but beautiful I love it. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla

Gail Debole

June 22, 2013 at 9:45 AM

The title drew me right in...and the imagery boosted my mind. Really like this!

Adarsh Raj

June 22, 2013 at 9:07 AM

Beautiful...........:)

Ravi Sathasivam

June 21, 2013 at 11:34 PM

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed it. Tfs

Russell Sivey

June 21, 2013 at 6:11 PM

This is a tremendous and superior write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a lovely piece, a descriptive poem, Great Work!!