Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

Like Rolled Furnace

wildfire grips highland
like rolled furnace
exploding sparklers on night air

glares of blazed ecstasy crackle
leaves wear soot
while trees cough ashen blasts 






For Debbie's Haiku Wannabees
by nette onclaud

Form: lune--5/3/5 WORDS perline

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Olusegun Arowolo June 12, 2013 at 3:50 PM Nice and lovely write,Nette..Congrats on your superb win...

S.Jagathsimhan Nair June 12, 2013 at 1:39 AM Congrats, nette, on the 3rd place, it deserves!! Jag

Nato Calubiran June 11, 2013 at 7:12 PM Congrats! 3rd place

Barbara Gorelick June 11, 2013 at 6:45 PM Great work Nette.. congrats. BG

Connie Gildersleeve June 11, 2013 at 6:36 PM Outstanding imagery Nette. Congratulation on your win. Connie

Jack Jordan June 11, 2013 at 6:14 PM Very evocative writing, and wonderful imagery. Congratulations on the win... Jack

Carrie Richards June 11, 2013 at 5:06 PM I feel the heat.....just reading these wonderful descriptions!! Great work!

Debbie Guzzi June 11, 2013 at 4:01 PM Loved the personification! Congrad's Light & Love

Kash Poet June 7, 2013 at 6:52 AM Very appropiate description of contest photo:Lov this!Down with fever.....aaagh.......

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri June 5, 2013 at 10:32 PM A fiery crackling freeverse for which thumbs up n kudos poetess. Hope u read mine too.

Russell Sivey June 5, 2013 at 8:37 PM You have expressed what fire can do very nicely with this awesome write! Wildfires are very dangerous, I don't want to be near any of them ever! You have written a masterfully wondrous poem here my friend! I loved reading it this evening, Great Work!!

Heather Ober June 5, 2013 at 12:05 PM Such a powerful punch of imagery and feeling in just a few short lines! Masterfully written :)

Poet Tacito June 5, 2013 at 11:55 AM Some expressive lines here. Don't play with fire, you will get burned. Awesome work!

Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2013 at 10:58 AM - Very well written, Nette - A big "bear hug" to you - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)