Like Pleasant Petrichor

"Recently scenes of early life have stolen into my mind, like breezes blown... " ~ Samuel Taylor Coleridge

Sweet memories pop up, and linger as petrichor, oftentimes
prompting me to slide down the evergreen joys of past
where, with the rhythm of dainty blooms, my song chimes;

Like the bright yellow sunflowers in fields vast, 
childhood scenes wave their cheery hands at me
prompting me to slide down the evergreen joys of past;

When fringed with vibrant colours of youthful glee, 
ah! my mind mirrors simple colours of love and fun -
childhood scenes wave their cheery hands at me; 

Playful scribbles in wall, the hide and seek and run, 
little delights such as spinning a top with thread
ah! my mind mirrors simple colours of love and fun;

Those clattery laughter and chatter that spread
the joys and smiles in sunny meadows of my youth, 
little delights such as spinning a top with thread;

Like how my springtime blossoms my mind soothe, 
sweet memories pop up, and linger as petrichor, oftentimes;
The joys and smiles in sunny meadows of my youth 
where, with the rhythm of dainty blooms, my song chimes.

Date: 11/02/2022
Inspired by "Writing Challenge - Past Memories - T forms Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

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Date: 11/3/2022 9:14:00 AM
Truly a lovely picture of childhood joy and enthusiasm for each day Ani! So sorry you missed the contest. I am sure this would have been on the winners list! Thank for sharing this lovely jaunt back into childhood! Sending blessings of joy.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/24/2022 9:34:00 AM
Thank you so very much Sam... Much appreciate your visit and comment... Sending blessings of joy to you too... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 11/2/2022 9:17:00 AM
Great imagery and Comfortable feeling in your verse. Good luck in the contest. Blessings my friend
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/2/2022 10:27:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear Eve... This I wrote just by the inspiration given by the above said contest, but I didn't enter Eve, I missed the deadline... Hugs... ~ Ani
Date: 11/2/2022 5:56:00 AM
Dearest Ani , You bring to the life the sights, sounds and smells of childhood! Bringing forth precious memories and simple moments in time that were full of so much pleasure … and the wonderful memories of those days . I love little delights such as spinning a top with a thread ! You brought me back to those memories with a smile on my face ! Best of luck in the contest . Sending big hugs and love . Susan xx :)
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Date: 11/2/2022 10:26:00 AM
Dearest Susan, your lovely comment made me smile... Yes those memories are so precious my friend... Am so glad you enjoyed reading my poem... Thank you so much and Big hugs back to you... ~ Ani
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