Like Moths

Moths do not appear too bright
When barreling into the light.
No matter if it’s bulb or flame,
Their gut reaction is the same.

We humans, though, don’t differ much.
We’re drawn to things we shouldn’t touch – 
Like drugs or gambling, food or booze – 
So many vices we can choose.

And then, like moths, ourselves we fling
In search of what we think will bring
Contentment or a sense of joy,
Forgetting that such things destroy.

An easy fix is rarely found
So soon we end up on the ground
Dejected, downcast and abashed
With wizened wings and hopes quite dashed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Mcleod Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 7:35 PM
Stupid is a stupid does. LOL
Bickerstaffe Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 4:21 PM
Brilliantly sustained 8 syllable meter and rhyming, as always! Very cleverly phrased. Best wishes, Keith
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 3:39 PM
So the solution is...... Turn off the lights! heehee. GREAT analogy you made, Ilene. Excellent!
Johnson Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 10:04 PM
A very nice analogy to refresh common sense. It's so important that we learn while still up on the fence. Before we make that big mistake and fall and break our neck. I think of it as having a nice cushy padded deck. :)
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