Deb M Poet Free verse

-Like He Did

No-one paid her attention
Like he did

Found her interesting
Like he did

Listened to and understood her
Like he did

Appreciated and protected her 
Liked he did

Made her laugh
Like he did

Truly knew her
Like he did

Filled her heart and soul 
Like he did

Completely and unconditionally loved her
Like he did

Left her unexpectedly forever 
Like he did

Left her heart shattered
Like he did

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Kim Rodrigues January 18, 2025 at 7:07 AM and she can smile because she had the kind of love many dream of, but still the utter sadness hurts and is recognized as not able to completely heal in this lifetime. My Dad is doing better. That’s not to say that life moves on, but in moments he can at least smile. He says he doesn’t know how he warms up at night..perhaps mom… Hugs and prayers Deb M February 12, 2025 at 12:37 AM A beautiful love indeed Kim....glad your dad is doing better my friend! Debx

Gary Radice January 17, 2025 at 9:10 AM Powerful stuff Deb. The ‘kicker’ of the last four lines well and truly kicked. I thought you were leading me to a point whereby he was going to die and leave her bereft. Cheers - Gary Deb M January 17, 2025 at 10:41 AM I think we all do that Gary ha! Debx Gary Radice January 17, 2025 at 10:10 AM Aah…he left her because he died..not because he walked out on her??! My massive misreading of it. (Not the first time I’ve done that with a poem) Apologies. Cheers - Gary Deb M January 17, 2025 at 9:32 AM Thanks so much Gary….and he did die and leave her bereft! Appreciating you dropping by! Debx

Jan Allison January 16, 2025 at 2:19 PM beautifully expressed Deb, I have a huge lump in my throat, its so hard when you lose that special someone:-( hugs jan xx Deb M January 17, 2025 at 9:34 AM Awww Jan thats quite the comment my friend…thankyou…and a fave to boot thats very special. Lovely to see you….lDebx Jan Allison January 16, 2025 at 2:20 PM A massive fave for me:-) xx

Ilene Bauer January 16, 2025 at 1:29 PM this is so well expressed, deb! bravo! Deb M January 17, 2025 at 9:36 AM Thankyou ilene …l truly value your thoughts and your support of my poetry! Debx

Sotto Poet January 16, 2025 at 12:56 PM Deb, the anguish of losing a loved one does truly linger. A poignant and wrenching poetry. Your beautiful poetry is always a delight to read. Deb M January 17, 2025 at 9:38 AM WOW Lasaad what a truly lovely comment….l appreciate your kind words! Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen January 16, 2025 at 10:02 AM - He was the best... painful to lose, Deb - Lovely poem :) - hugs Deb M January 17, 2025 at 9:37 AM Thankyou lovely warm Sunshine….l appreciate you! Debx

Jay Narain January 16, 2025 at 9:59 AM A heartfelt and moving poem. The pain of losing someone dear stays in heart. Deb M January 17, 2025 at 9:35 AM Thankyou so much Jay….always lovely to see you ! Debx

John Read January 16, 2025 at 9:49 AM Hi Deb I understand the feeling only to well having lost my wife. xx Deb M January 16, 2025 at 9:52 AM Oh l am sorry to hear that john….l cant even imagine…..Debx

Ink Empress January 16, 2025 at 8:35 AM Sigh this hits deep dear debx, so hearfelt and moving, soul stirring and seamlessly flowing poem: the ending is sad, as thats not what one expects from love thats so deep! Pleasure always reading your poems: sending you light always Deb M January 16, 2025 at 10:01 AM Its so lovely to see you sweet Ink and read your kind comment! Thankyou as always…..Debx

Paula Goldsmith January 16, 2025 at 8:08 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful/powerful write. FAV for me... Have a fun day as you write away.................. Deb M January 16, 2025 at 9:50 AM Another Fav…you are spoiling me Paula haha! Thankyou my friend….Debx