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Like Dusk's Montage

Fragments of dusk, like a montage The pagoda of trees Nocturnal smiles and whispering; Are caught up in the breeze. Then a young star rises above Her fingers warmly crown… Dusk breaking nightfall, glints the air While a city slows down. * ) ~ ] ] Yet, fireflies rustle through the leaves And naughty kids tiptoe On slivers of shimmering grass, Across the garden’s row. Crickets trail into a backyard Frogs moan a husky tune… Where cats appear on rooftop walls To serenade the moon. Soon all these vignettes of the dark Lay out a homey nest, To gather strength for morn’s promise Unfolding at her best. ------------- All The Little Pieces Contest Rhyme xaxa 8/6/8/6 Sponsor: Broken Wings 9/17/2016
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Merryman Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Excellent, creative imagery of nocturnal scenes! Great work, Nette! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
La France Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 10:20 AM
nette, you always write such pretty poems, and I love your image too, congratulations on your win in my contest ~
Krampe Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 5:14 PM
Beautiful night time poem, Nette. (And just before I read this, I just posted a poem that has crickets and fireflies, too.. total coincidence, I swear.) Congrats on your win. Agnes
Goff Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 7:43 AM
Had to savor slowly, Nette....love the way you animate the rising star....I love observing the various conjunctions in the night sky, my favorite (& my Dads, gone 10yrs now):Crescent Moon cradling Venus...your last stanza sets the table for a new day so nicely
Raha Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 2:17 AM
This is just a spectacular nocturnal delight, the images will be live in my mind for a long time nette. Wonderful read.
May Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 9:37 PM
This is lovely Nette...enjoyed
Turner Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 9:10 PM
Nette, you imagery is spectacular and vivid. Easy to follow. I'm glad you're back! I missed reading your poems:)
Smith Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 8:10 PM
Lovely images Nette, best wishes in the contest...
Gonza Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 5:59 PM
You bring slices of evening scenes, put them together in a captivating manner and make the whole atmosphere alive. Literary masterpiece, I must say!
Arnone Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 4:27 PM
What beautiful descriptions, Nette. The fireflies between the leaves; the kids tiptoeing on the grass -- I could see it all as if I were there. :-)
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