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Like Deer They Run

Like deer they run, so gracefully With winged feet, youth's pedigree They flow along, near-effortless Like deer they run, so gracefully On straightaways, they're swifter yet Lithe frames incline, take off like jets Like deer they run, so gracefully Winged feet, youth's pedigree

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 8/17/2019 6:13:00 PM

And every year that passes, we wish we had another one of those fast feet. Enjoyed.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/17/2019 9:34:00 PM

The only feet I have left are metrical, as in tetrameter, pentameter, etc... Blessings, gw

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/16/2019 3:59:00 PM

Love the title, gracefully written triolet, gw!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/16/2019 5:52:00 PM

Hey, thanks for the support on this one, Michelle. I see it hasn't gotten many views or comments, but I'm with you: I like this one too!! :) gw

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2019 5:07:00 PM

youth does have an advantage over the aged in t his area. Enjoyed the read. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/15/2019 6:09:00 PM

Advantage is an understatement, perhaps. LOL. Thanks for visiting my page too, Sara. Appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon