Gershon Wolf Poet Triolet

Like Deer They Run

Like deer they run, so gracefully
With winged feet, youth's pedigree
They flow along, near-effortless
Like deer they run, so gracefully
On straightaways, they're swifter yet
Lithe frames incline, take off like jets
Like deer they run, so gracefully
Winged feet, youth's pedigree

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M. L. Kiser August 17, 2019 at 6:13 PM And every year that passes, we wish we had another one of those fast feet. Enjoyed. Gershon Wolf August 17, 2019 at 9:34 PM The only feet I have left are metrical, as in tetrameter, pentameter, etc... Blessings, gw

Michelle Faulkner August 16, 2019 at 3:59 PM Love the title, gracefully written triolet, gw! Gershon Wolf August 16, 2019 at 5:52 PM Hey, thanks for the support on this one, Michelle. I see it hasn't gotten many views or comments, but I'm with you: I like this one too!! :) gw

Sara Kendrick August 15, 2019 at 5:07 PM youth does have an advantage over the aged in t his area. Enjoyed the read. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Gershon Wolf August 15, 2019 at 6:09 PM Advantage is an understatement, perhaps. LOL. Thanks for visiting my page too, Sara. Appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon