Robert Pettit Poet Rhyme

Like Dandelions On My Lawn

We had such a good time on our first date.
How did I become someone you would hate?
The way you have acted seems quite peculiar to me.
All that you have done has left me in a quandary.
I needed you like I needed more dandelions on my lawn.
I feel no sorrow, but relief, now that you are gone.

Inspired by Andrea (I’m not writing about her)

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Shadow Hamilton March 8, 2014 at 4:24 PM like the rhyme Robert sweet relief is good hugs

Andrea Dietrich March 7, 2014 at 11:13 PM hahahaha. I love the last line: I'm not writing about her!! that would be awful if you were, after saying you feel relief this person is gone. You made me LOL

Frederic Parker March 7, 2014 at 6:26 PM Sounds like high maintenance....

Jack Horne March 7, 2014 at 2:59 PM so glad you're able to move on if this is based on reality, my friend - and very glad to see it's not about Andrea LOL

Anne-Lise Andresen March 7, 2014 at 1:21 PM - A good poem, Robert !....no sorrow :))) - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll March 7, 2014 at 12:50 PM Nice slice of life write Robert!