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Like Branches

I’ve looked back Remembering days And the ways Our voices persistently sway… like the branches And the nights— Recalling the bright city Lights Upon the sidewalks We told ourselves We’d walk But never did The quiet that followed It was the least expected And I was waiting for the crickets To end this tongue-tied trance The summer faded Crickets killed by frost An endless trance, That I had never lost And it all returned one day Just to be up and taken away Determined I stand To return to that land We’ve discovered. The crickets never came

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/12/2010 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Ben. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2010 8:06:00 PM
Congradulations on having your poem featured Ben, I am pleased to have read this, enjoyed, and best wishes to your upcoming days..P.D.
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Date: 9/7/2010 9:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Ben. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2010 7:16:00 PM
nice write, enjoyed
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Date: 5/21/2010 3:09:00 PM
most excellent last line...so unexpected and so evocative...like no luck! Light & love
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Date: 5/21/2010 1:54:00 PM
So much depth in this poem for the reader to think about. Nice use of imagery. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 5/21/2010 5:22:00 AM
This is excellent. I like the rhyming pattern. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 5/21/2010 4:06:00 AM
Great write! welcome to soup!
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Date: 5/21/2010 3:57:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Benjamin. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2010 3:11:00 AM
High hopes, unfullfilled dreams ncie write
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