Like Branches

I’ve looked back
Remembering days
And the ways
Our voices persistently sway…
like the branches

And the nights—
Recalling the bright city
Lights
Upon the sidewalks
We told ourselves
We’d walk

But never did

The quiet that followed
It was the least expected

And I was waiting for the crickets
To end this tongue-tied trance

The summer faded
Crickets killed by frost
An endless trance,
That I had never lost

And it all returned one day
Just to be up and taken away
Determined I stand
To return to that land
We’ve discovered.

The crickets never came
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 12, 2010 at 11:52 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Ben. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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September 9, 2010 at 8:06 PM
Congradulations on having your poem featured Ben, I am pleased to have read this, enjoyed, and best wishes to your upcoming days..P.D.
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September 7, 2010 at 9:46 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Ben. Love, Carol
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May 21, 2010 at 7:16 PM
nice write, enjoyed
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May 21, 2010 at 3:09 PM
most excellent last line...so unexpected and so evocative...like no luck! Light & love
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May 21, 2010 at 1:54 PM
So much depth in this poem for the reader to think about. Nice use of imagery. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent here. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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May 21, 2010 at 5:22 AM
This is excellent. I like the rhyming pattern. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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May 21, 2010 at 4:06 AM
Great write! welcome to soup!
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May 21, 2010 at 3:57 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Benjamin. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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May 21, 2010 at 3:11 AM
High hopes, unfullfilled dreams ncie write
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