Like a Whale

large and in charge
the weight of the world
floats easily

can't seem to get the burdden of my shoulders.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 4:07 AM
Princess, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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May 25, 2013 at 12:01 PM
P P, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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May 23, 2013 at 10:52 PM
Welcome to the site. You are off to a good start with this first submission. Good write, but the word in the last line is correctly spelled "burden". There is only one "D" in the word.
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May 23, 2013 at 6:13 PM
This is a very beautiful poem and it's very true. Welcome to the soup my dear friend, Princess! Thank you so much for sharing your talent and for taking time to read my work. Keep on writing and have a blessed day! love and hugs, Leonora
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May 22, 2013 at 2:28 PM
Hello there and thank you for commenting, I guess you are new round here; its a good place to meet different people and styles hope you enjoy your time here pleased to read your words..
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