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Like a Whale

large and in charge the weight of the world floats easily can't seem to get the burdden of my shoulders.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2013 4:07:00 AM

Princess, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 5/25/2013 12:01:00 PM

P P, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~

Robert Pettit

Date: 5/23/2013 10:52:00 PM

Welcome to the site. You are off to a good start with this first submission. Good write, but the word in the last line is correctly spelled "burden". There is only one "D" in the word.

Len Gasun

Date: 5/23/2013 6:13:00 PM

This is a very beautiful poem and it's very true. Welcome to the soup my dear friend, Princess! Thank you so much for sharing your talent and for taking time to read my work. Keep on writing and have a blessed day! love and hugs, Leonora

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/22/2013 2:28:00 PM

Hello there and thank you for commenting, I guess you are new round here; its a good place to meet different people and styles hope you enjoy your time here pleased to read your words..