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Like a Waterfall

the words tumbled forth like a waterfall over a steep cliff and when they hit bottom as words inevitably will they did handsprings backflips somersaults and kept on laughing

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Date: 5/10/2021 11:48:00 AM
These sound like my words! "they did handsprings backflips somersaults and kept on laughing" You can keep them; they are being too silly for me today.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/10/2021 5:37:00 PM
Ha, ha! You're right, you know. Hadn't thought of that. Trixie must have thrown her Muse, ventriloquistically :) gw
Date: 5/10/2021 10:40:00 AM
A fun read!!! I enjoyed it!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/10/2021 5:35:00 PM
Thanks for the visit, Smita. Take care, Gershon
Date: 5/10/2021 8:52:00 AM
I loved this, Gershon. It is such a simple idea, so well-written. I could feel the words tumbling. Wow!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/10/2021 5:35:00 PM
I'm practicing for the gymnastics team --- That's mental gymnastics, of course. Happy Monday evening, Milt! :) gw
Date: 5/10/2021 5:44:00 AM
a charming poem ~
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 5/10/2021 5:33:00 PM
Thanks, Line. ~ Tumbling without Stumbling

Book: Shattered Sighs