M.N.I.W M.N.I.W Poet Free verse

Like a Snowstorm Upon a Mountain Top

It feels like a snowstorm upon a mountain top. 
You call out to no one, but your calls still echo until you're engulfed in your own bitterness. 
You grow numb and resent everything until your mind is blank.
The sun doesn't shine. 
It just laughs at you, trolling your life. 
Fooling you into thinking that light will ever come your way again. 
The darkness becomes your light and your world become bittersweet and dim.

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Shadow Hamilton April 18, 2015 at 5:58 AM congrats on being featured hugs

Poet Destroyer A April 8, 2015 at 11:56 AM The Poem is deep. I love the title! N.M.I., A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Nicole Ussery April 7, 2015 at 8:49 AM In my opinion, I believe that your title should not be included in the verses of the poem. When it is different it leads the reader thinking. It allows the mind to search for what you have chose it for. Otherwise the poem was well created.