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We are We are Like a shining sea of stars How deep is the dark? How solid’s the ground? Without saving grace, how can we be found? The countenance of faithless man does fall. Search God’s glory — do you hear his call? We are We are Singing in the deep dark sea Tethered to antimatter— what matters? Without God our dusty ashen cloud scatters. Furthermore the earth sinks below our feet. Forevermore I’ll rather cling to his beat. O sun O moon Gifting light from God above Stunning how beautiful is saving grace. Blood, sweat and tears, our fears upon Christ’s face. All man…all God…his body, bruised and raw. This royal perfection—without a flaw. We are We are Like a shining sea of stars How deep is the dark? How solid’s the ground? Without saving grace, how can we be found? The countenance of faithless man does fall. Search God’s glory — do you hear his call? 10/6/2021

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Date: 10/7/2021 11:15:00 AM
I feel that Shakespeare was channeled by Kim today "O sun O moon Gifting light from God above"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2021 12:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren! ~hugs, Kim
Date: 10/6/2021 8:32:00 AM
This is a masterpiece that should inspire all. Well done. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/7/2021 12:14:00 PM
Thank you, dear Victor! ~ hugs
Date: 10/6/2021 7:06:00 AM
You've given praise to the One who justly deserves it. He calls the ones with righteous hearts. Well written, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2021 7:42:00 AM
Thank you, Jenna! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 10/6/2021 6:02:00 AM
Enjoyed the lovely tone and flow of this beautiful poem, Kim. The second and last stanza enhance the essence of your poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/6/2021 6:22:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay!

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