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Like a Rose

Like a rose Your heart slowly began to wilt First I thought it was because of me But then I realized there was never a me It was always just her

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Beata Agustin

Date: 3/4/2025 10:07:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.

Chris Green

Date: 10/9/2018 2:10:00 PM

The sadness is falling from this wonderful piece as petals from a dead rose. This was so cool. I could feel the emotions in this short but powerful poem.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/9/2016 11:03:00 AM

So very sad charlize. I do hope you find the one that cares about you.