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Like a Rose

Been blessed with an very sensitive nose Drawn to ladies that smell like a rose An intense attraction As I leap into action Shiver and shake right down to my toes © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 7/29/2015 5:09:00 PM

The scent of a rose is indeed delightful ^..^ Cool one! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/30/2015 6:35:00 AM

It sure gets my motor running! Love, Jack xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/29/2015 9:42:00 AM

Dragon takes my rose garden and, shows his poopy power. Yep! He poops on my roses! Fortunately he hasn't noticed I replaced my roses with plastic ones. I shovel them out, spray them with water, then fabreze. Yeah. I know. I've watched too much TV and commercials this summer... LOL... But my favorite part is when I dump on rose smelling perfume! At least his bathroom smells good! We've ordered metal roses with electric shocks to help potty train him. Honestly! I think he poops there to annoy me!

Carol Eastman
Date: 7/29/2015 11:25:00 AM

Oh He gets in trouble... But doesn't care. Silly Dragon! Spanking doesn't help. He can't feel it thru those scales. And he's so stubborn... even the time outs at the lake don't help. After all he loves the water. Sigh! That's why we're trying a little electro shock therapy... He gets the roses... and they bite back! Think it'll work?... I doubt it but will try...

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/29/2015 10:22:00 AM

"He poops on my roses!" and you don't chastise him or you don't dare chastise him? LOL Hugs, Jack xxx