Sara Kendrick Poet Tetractys

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As the rose opens accepting the early dew, so our hearts open accepting love that is kind and true..

Like a Rose

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                                                     Heart
                                                    Opens
                                                Like a rose
                                             Gradually gives
                   Each kind word, gentle touch_heart's fragrance blooms
                       Love's precious scent lures_gives in return more
                                             Generous gifts
                                             Kindness grows
                                                Blossoms
                                                  Grace

Contest:Double Tetracty
Sponsor:Michael J. Falatico
From my inner soul....

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Judy Ball November 18, 2011 at 7:58 PM The heart is indeed like a lovely blossom. It is also just as easily bruised when as it opens it is rejected. Nice job. God Bless, JB

Jack Horne November 16, 2011 at 1:55 PM Beautiful write, my friend. I love the way you've used the rose here

Kash Poet November 15, 2011 at 12:59 PM Excellent message here Sara...enjoyed.Best wishes

Daver Austin November 15, 2011 at 11:39 AM Beautifully done, Sara. Kindness and love - like a snowball rolling downhill. Luck in the contest. Love, daver

Russell Sivey November 15, 2011 at 10:59 AM Awesome write Sara! This is one of the best tetracty I've read! Direct from the heart!! Great work!!

Black Eyed Susan November 15, 2011 at 9:21 AM very pretty. When I think of you, I think of a a very giving and loving person :) good luck in the contest!

Jessica Brown November 15, 2011 at 8:28 AM Uplifting :)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 15, 2011 at 6:17 AM God is like a rose...forever blooming. I enjoyed your poem this morning. God be with you. (And thank you for being a community builder and for unselfishly sharing your time to read and encourage poetry on this site. My life took a swift new direction about 8 months ago, and I have not been able to reciprocate. My thanks go to every community builder who enjoys poetry and encourages other poets, like I once tried to do. I love you…all! Lovingly, Dane Ann)

Tony Lane November 15, 2011 at 5:05 AM Good luck in the contest. Tony