Like a Rose

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As the rose opens accepting the early dew, so our hearts open accepting love that is kind and true..

. Heart Opens Like a rose Gradually gives Each kind word, gentle touch_heart's fragrance blooms Love's precious scent lures_gives in return more Generous gifts Kindness grows Blossoms Grace Contest:Double Tetracty Sponsor:Michael J. Falatico From my inner soul....

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Judy Ball

Date: 11/18/2011 7:58:00 PM

The heart is indeed like a lovely blossom. It is also just as easily bruised when as it opens it is rejected. Nice job. God Bless, JB

Jack Horne

Date: 11/16/2011 1:55:00 PM

Beautiful write, my friend. I love the way you've used the rose here

Kash Poet

Date: 11/15/2011 12:59:00 PM

Excellent message here Sara...enjoyed.Best wishes

Daver Austin

Date: 11/15/2011 11:39:00 AM

Beautifully done, Sara. Kindness and love - like a snowball rolling downhill. Luck in the contest. Love, daver

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/15/2011 10:59:00 AM

Awesome write Sara! This is one of the best tetracty I've read! Direct from the heart!! Great work!!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 11/15/2011 9:21:00 AM

very pretty. When I think of you, I think of a a very giving and loving person :) good luck in the contest!

Jessica Brown

Date: 11/15/2011 8:28:00 AM

Uplifting :)

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/15/2011 6:17:00 AM

God is like a rose...forever blooming. I enjoyed your poem this morning. God be with you. (And thank you for being a community builder and for unselfishly sharing your time to read and encourage poetry on this site. My life took a swift new direction about 8 months ago, and I have not been able to reciprocate. My thanks go to every community builder who enjoys poetry and encourages other poets, like I once tried to do. I love you…all! Lovingly, Dane Ann)

Tony Lane

Date: 11/15/2011 5:05:00 AM

Good luck in the contest. Tony