Like a River You Pour Over Me

songs of all songs your voice 
inside this mellowed heart of mine 
                       resonates
              with me 

you are the added note 
to a melody already playing 
                          in my soul 

an ode to our love 
like waves of the ocean 
                        you pour over me 
                                                 like a river
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Pandit Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 6:06 AM
Splendid write, Vienna.
Rose  Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 10:11 AM
Glad you enjoyed it Vijay, have a blessed day :)
Tor Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 12:00 AM
Love the way you wrote this. I see and feel your thoughts. Thank you for sharing...
Rose  Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 10:10 AM
Thank you, Michael, for using your senses to creative a lovely comment. Much appreciated
Buhagiar Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 10:47 PM
This is so romantic. There is beauty in love.
Rose  Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 10:09 AM
Yes, indeed Victor there is great beauty in true love
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