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Like a Ripple

When you swim beneath the waves no one can see you as you are like a ripple in the tides the colors of your body moving across the sea like a ripple in the tides maybe when you die that is how you become like a ripple in the tides your shade moving through the world nearly invisible, but still there like a ripple in the tides.

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Date: 9/4/2019 2:11:00 PM
This was really good. I enjoyed reading this. I like the repeating lines and the ending was fantastic. Nicely expressed.
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