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Like a Phoenix You Raise

When life is miserable and bad When circumstances make you sad When one after another problems abound Like a phoenix you raise from the ashes of agony and smile in utter faith When physical pain distresses When you lack strength to live When medicines fail to cure Like a phoenix you raise from the ashes of pain ignoring it, carry on with life When faced with hard to resolve problems When mind is perplexed for want of solution When you feel struck up from all sides Like a phoenix you raise from ashes of contemplation leave your worries to God, be calm Like a phoenix you raise Your towering personality Amidst worldly chaos Resolve to be happy, calm, unperturbed Inspire others, achieve peace Never give up, never die Like a phoenix raise again and again More resolute, more strong Show the world nothing can kill your ambitions, your happiness, your calmness Life is a saga of dualities Along with happiness, sadness abounds We endure it from birth till death After death like phoenix we raise from ashes Take another birth and suffer unabated Ask yourself how to end it all Try for salvation, to see your soul Then like a phoenix you raise from ashes Leave mortal world, become one with God End all your problems, attain infinite bliss Like a phoenix you raise! Premier contest winner 7th position 20.03.2021 Contest Name - Your best free verse so far this year Sponsor - John Hamilton

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Date: 3/31/2021 4:41:00 AM
Rama this one is really nice...Congrats on your win...much love...take care :)
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/31/2021 12:22:00 PM
Thanks Carol. Congratulations to you too. Take care, Rama
Date: 3/30/2021 7:31:00 PM
Rama! Thank you for participating in the contest and sharing this brilliant work with us all. Your poem is simply superb! Congrats on your win and look forward to your participation in the next contest, ‘where are we headed’. God bless!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 3/30/2021 9:00:00 PM
Thanks for the placement. Inspirational topic. I saw some great entries. Have a wonderful day ahead. Take care, Rama

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