Like a Passing Breeze

I felt the wind soft against
the gate of love and hope
and beauty flowered in wishful grace
fragranced
whispering quietly in the passing breeze 
to the keeping of my heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 12, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Jeff Burris, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Love LINDA :)
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August 30, 2015 at 2:07 PM
JEFF, Great piece to read, before I head out. Well done ~SKAT~
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January 31, 2012 at 7:10 AM
It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning Jeff. I hope that you might be able to find the time to read some of the other poetry here also. Love, Carol
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January 30, 2012 at 6:35 PM
Good poem about nature, I enjoyed reading it.
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