Like a Paper Cut

Love hurts
After the rain
My friend used to say
On those long rainy days
In Sydney
You need a bad woman
And a good bottle of scotch
I think that kind of love
Hurts like a paper cut.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Godwin Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 2:17 PM
Witty and entertaining ride, Uwe ... CayCay
Stroh Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 3:13 PM
Thank you kindly Cay. Cheers
Nance Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 1:41 PM
I like it, a little rough around the edges with a sharp tongue slice at the end. Enjoyed
Stroh Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 5:12 PM
Thanks for the feedback Cas. It is appreciated.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 9:57 AM
"Sydney" and "Scotch" give such flavor to your simple words. Nice
Stroh Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Good ob Kim, as Sydney and Scotch goes together well and speaks volumes. Thank you.
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