Like a Knife

I loved you from the start
I'm yours to keep
Remember me when
You're asleep
Cause we'll never be
Together again
Like a knife you
Stab me through the heart

I'm so numb that I
Can't breathe
I don't need you
Anymore
You're nothing to me
All I want is to be free
Like a knife you
Stab me through the heart

This heart has no feeling
It's you I'm needing
But it's you I can't have
I      you
Like a knife you
Stab me through the heart
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Loving Iii Avatar
October 20, 2008 at 3:14 PM
good start for a 15 year old. love always finds us long before it should. slow it down it can break you if you go too fast. feeling empty is all part of it try my To Deneen and tell me what you think. john
Loving Iii Avatar
October 20, 2008 at 2:24 PM
Alexz, i don't know how to say the first name. but as for my oppinion; is it tward the poem i wrote. suddenly i'm not conservitive and this is your reaction? AND your breaking up with me. i dont even know if your a man or a woman and i think i'm going to kill myself. by the way the year was 63. john
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October 20, 2008 at 11:35 AM
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